Hey, welcome to Infamous! I'm guessing, judging by your posts, that your having a few problems getting everything down. I've deleted the other two forms that you put up here, I'm guessing, on accident, but if you have any major problems just send me a PM.
Your character sheet needs a bit of work, to be honest, but it'll be fine if you make a couple adjustments. First, use the edit button which is in the top right corner of your post to make changes. It helps stuff not spam up as much in these topics. Second, your powers, history, and personality need to be at least four sentences long. Get those two things down and we'll see if there's anything else that needs fixing.
Again, welcome to the site.