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PostSubject: Skylar. (canceled, admin please delete. )   Tue Mar 25, 2014 10:47 pm

Name: skylar.

Age: 25

Gender: male

Conduit

Powers: Telekinesis, super human learning, psychic ability's. On a good day with total concentration he could lift a desk over his head. But that's not what makes him who he is. He has the ability to gain knowledge by seeing things, say he used his tk ability to slit a tv in two. He could look right down the center and after a moment tell you how it works. This knowledge will fade soon however and he would have no clue how to build it again. The mind has its limits after all. However he can keep powers for as long as he wants. he has a pathological need to gain knowledge, he can do this through his psychic ability's. Its similar to devlins power, except his opponent has to be totally beaten or they will resist as it is very painful. His telekinesis can be used on as many things as he can concentrate on but the weight limit is universal. So he cant lift up two desks but rather two half desks. And this is the large businessman desk not the small preschool desk. If he can absorb his opponent for a few seconds. Then he is dangerous, If he can absorb a conduit for a good 10-20 seconds then he can use there powers. Just as powerful as the original but without the skill or practice. Every second counts as a half minute of powers and if he can drain one until death then it will last for twelve hours. He can use his telekinesis to exploit his opponents  weaknesses after a brief drain. Like a painful cavity that can be grabbed or an old wound that can with a little pressure be just as painful as the day you got it. He cannot grab internal organs however as he cannot see them. on a side note he is really good at staying alive, its not a full on power per say. But if left in a ditch with several bleeding wounds he's going to be the one to crawl out.

Any affiliations: He used to be a member of the first sons, though he was immediately kicked out. If a first son saw him now they are likely to shoot.

History: Skylar was a member of the first sons, he was involved in ray sphere testing and when he clung to life and gained telekinesis he was immediately asked to join. he was moved to one of there facility's and now he worked for them. He was quite powerful and respected for about a week. Until the first sons realized his powers had warped his mind. He was a killer, he is a killer. So while as soon as possible they had a small group of there own conduits dress head to toe in clothing that he couldn't touch took him back to his apartment and beat him viciously. One guy even stabbed him in the stomach before leaving. He wasn't breathing ( Well he was but once every four minutes ) and he was in a coma like state. But Skylar wasn't done living just yet. for hours he laid there moaning. But after three days he awoke, removed the burlap sack from his head. no idea who he was, and since they took his wallet and looted his house he would have no way to find out. Especially after his landlord marched right on up and said his rent was to late. He told him to get the hell out of this place, because he didn't live there anymore. As Skylar walked out. His shoulder bumped up against the other mans and the man ( Lets call him bob. ) spasmed in pain. But to Skylar it was like a feeling of euphoria spread up his arm and he got an impression of the alcoholic man. " I said get out of here! " The mans voice boomed. And Skylar did. He wanted to " Absorb " More people but for the first time in his life it felt wrong. He had developed antisocial personality disorder, and didn't feel sympathy for his victims. But now he felt genuine guilt. His stomach moaned with hunger. Time to make a name for himself in empire city. He walked out into the sunrise.

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Personality: Wickedly smart and perceptive, over the years he has gotten addicted to draining peoples brains dry as he can still absorb the thoughts of corpses but he has poor self control. Like say for instance if he asked a car dealer for a sports car and was displeased at the price. He would buy the cheapest lemon pickup truck they had and drive out the lot. Only to ten minutes later crash into the building with it and steal the keys to the car he wanted tapping the dead dealership salesmen on the head before driving off. But he struggles sometimes, he wants to help people with his new conscience. And he now feels guilt for hurting others. It has been an unfamiliar feeling his hole life and hurts ten times as more than it would for another. The almost crippling pain will only get worse if he becomes good but will slowly fade if he embraces evil.

Appearance Form:

Eye color: blue.

Hair color: Light brown.

Skin color: simple white not uncommon for a new Yorker.

Clothing style: His clothing wouldn't stand out in a crowd, it isn't that expensive and he isn't the one to stylize. He dresses in either black or brown. Never the same really, sometimes he will wear his hair up with glasses, other times he will wake with a five a clock shadow and just go with that for a day. Because of this its very hard to recognize him.

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Karma effects on appearance and powers:

Hero: His black clothes are replaced by white striped with blue ones and his power sets radiate restraint and control.
Champion: Different color shirts that pop a little more and a blue power set.
Guardian: His black clothes change to grey.
Neutral: Black, balck, black and more black.
Thug: Usually darker clothes with red bits dotted here and there.
Outlaw: helf of his clothes look like he came out of a Metallica concert the other half from a bloody slaughter.
inFamous: Half of his clothes white half of his clothes white splattered with blood.


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PostSubject: Re: Skylar. (canceled, admin please delete. )   Mon Mar 31, 2014 4:39 pm

I know Im not an admin, but... God. I don't even know where to start with this thing.
For one thing, we already have a character with a Sylar face-claim.
Two, I don't care how badass or awesome you are, NOTHING that's human, conduit or not, can survive over a dozen shots to the head. Unless he has a ridiculous healing or endurance power that you haven't mentioned, that's plain BS.
Another thing, his powers. He is highly overpowered. He can lift a bus over his head, and learn how things work? Especially on a first character, this is ludicrous. We have a character that makes advanced technology in his spare time, and you're telling me this guy, if given two minutes, could learn how to build it all, AND have a TK ability strong enough to lift a bus?
Another thing- Why do the First Sons respect him? He hasn't done ANYTHING from what I have read to make the Sons respect him, other than having huge power. There's a difference between respect, and flat out fear. And I'm fairly certain if the First Sons fear you, they wouldn't let you join. They'd either stay away from you, or outright kill you. Another thing with his history, if he's as powerful as you say he is, how did he allow himself to be kidnapped? Plus, why would his killers bother giving him a fake name and hundreds of dollars if they were just going to kill him anyways?

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PostSubject: Re: Skylar. (canceled, admin please delete. )   Tue Apr 01, 2014 6:56 pm

Alright, I have taken your criticisms constructively and almost totally rewritten him. His picture has changed, his telekinesis can now only lift a large desk. And over all much more descriptive detail has been added to his history and powers. Oh, and now he got kicked out after a week from the first sons immediately after they realized he was psicho. Changed the amount of damage he took to one shot to the head and a brutal first sun conduit beating in his apartment.
So if you have anything else to add then please do so, but if not then could you turn this thread over to an admin?
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PostSubject: Re: Skylar. (canceled, admin please delete. )   Tue Apr 01, 2014 9:07 pm

I don't exactly have the power to turn this over to an admin. I can't just 'summon' them and make them look at your character sheet for you. At this point, I still don't think they'd accept it.
It still says he was shot in the head. No way he'd survive that. If he was beaten and lying on the ground, there's no way a shot like that would miss. He's sitting there, motionless, and the bullet would almost definitely fire through his skull, ripping through countless vital parts and killing him.
Another thing- He can use other conduits powers? That in itself is an OP ability. We do have characters with that, but when they have it it's highly limited and they have NO supplemental powers to it.
Secondly, I don't think the phrase- "The most painful thing you can imagine" will exactly fly around here. I'm fairly certain the admins would want a more finite measure of power.

The last thing I have to say is more of a personal criticism, but, I don't know about you, but if I see a dude dressed in completely black, with his hood up and his face down in the middle of a random crowd of civilians, I'd think he's up to something.

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PostSubject: Re: Skylar. (canceled, admin please delete. )   Tue Apr 01, 2014 9:48 pm

Hmm..... I made some changes, but this is proving to be to much of a hassle. I think I will drop him for a more traditional conduit.
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