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PostSubject: Connor Miles (inFamous Create Your Own Character)   Wed Nov 26, 2014 7:46 am

Name: Connor Miles
Age: 14
Gender: Male

Pick one (Conduit/Gang Member/Citizen): Conduit

Powers: Lightning
Connor has the same powers as Cole McGrath, except that he can do a bit more. An example is that he can run as fast as neon (those who uses neon). But he still has the weakness for water.

Affliction: Some scientists is after him, trying to catch him and use him as a bio-weapon.

History: Connor got his powers from his dad, Silver Miles. And Silver got his powers from an explosion in a laboratory, where they were making with their own hands a RFI, that they could take the powers off conduits with. They used a Blast Core, but they were less careful, and because of an experiment with the Blast Core (they were trying to split it off), it exploded. He was closest to it, and got affected. After the explosion, he became a Conduit.

He tried to remain calm and not showing his powers. He came through his life well. he got a wife, and got a son, Connor.  But when he found out that the child had the same powers as him (due to genetic share or what it's called) he tried to kill it because he was afraid of its future. But when he hurted Connor, he healed and out of nonsense and crying, he shot sparks at his own father, causing him to fall off the window of the hospital (where they were). After that, the father dissappeared, Connor couldn't remember him due to his young age (he was legit borned that day) and the father never came back. the mother was with Connor, and after this tragedy, she would never tell her son about his father. She would try to raise him as a normal child, no matter what. She didn't want him to become a bio-weapon for the army.

After 12 years, Connor discovered, that he actually had powers. He discovered it, when he fell off their own roof. He could see, that he healed and that it didn't hurt that much. After that, he became more courageous. He tried to jump off roofs and make parkour, and he was a nature talent at it.

But at a galla with his classmates (he had classmates, his best friend was Nicky and Chris), some scientists came and ordered him to become a research project. They knew that he had powers from his dad. They didn't tell him, and they didn't tell him that he had other powers either nor that he should become a bio weapon. But he still said no, and the agents and scientists didn't like his answer. So they send agents to kidnap him when he was heading home, and it was then that he found out his powers and he successfully defeated the agents. He had a choice, to kill them or leave them to the scientists and the military government. He let them free.

After that, he realized, that he could use his powers to become a superhero. He told it to Nicky and Chris, who only believed in him, after he proved it. There was a lot of crime in his city, and he wanted it to be gone.

Personally: Connor is kinda naive, sometimes. Most of the time he uses by playing parkour and video games with his friends. He is gentle, when he can be, but if he is in trouble, he always get away. Due to his mother , he is gentle to his mother and usually wants to make her happy by surprising her and stuff. He is an, yeah angel to his mother. when he is with friends, they make eachother laugh. When they play, run parkour and other stuff, they laugh. Like joking to eachother and they love it. lol!

Power use: He can shoot lightning as Cole McGrath from InFamous 2. He can run incredibly fast, and can connect his powers to electrical sources, and upload. He can also find around electrical networks using a connection to a wire.

Appearence Form: He is much courageous and always tries to exceed his limit or other's limit.

Eye Color: Dark Brown (Yellow when he uses his powers.)

Hair Color: Black

Skin Color: Dark Moulat (Mother is african, dad is american)

Clothing Style: Blue West, white blouse, blue, hat (kinda knitted hat from his mother), blue pants with pants pockets and black running shoes.

End Affliction: His karma is Champion
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PostSubject: Re: Connor Miles (inFamous Create Your Own Character)   Sun Nov 30, 2014 1:16 pm

Seems good, but his powers are over the top and there's not enough detail about them.

He's strong enough that he was able to kill his father, who you said had the exact same powers as him, when he was only a baby? You're telling me he's powerful enough he he can easily kill someone who has infinitely more experience than he does with his own powers?

Also, shooting lightning at a Cole McGrath level? No. It's a general understanding here the infamous protagonists are over powered, and if a character is equal to or greater than them it's considered a no-no. And just how fast can he run? If it's more than a twice as fast as an average person, then it's a no in conjunction with his already awesomely powerful lightning.

tldr; Just tone down the powers and try to make it more clear about their extent.

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PostSubject: Re: Connor Miles (inFamous Create Your Own Character)   Fri Dec 05, 2014 6:38 am

UniCops wrote:
Name: Connor Miles
Age: 14
Gender: Male

Pick one (Conduit/Gang Member/Citizen): Conduit

Powers: Lightning
Connor has the powers of lightning, like Cole McGrath, but he isn't that good at using them.

Affliction: Some scientists is after him, trying to catch him and use him as a bio-weapon.

History: Connor got his powers from his dad, Silver Miles. And Silver got his powers from an explosion in a laboratory, where they were making with their own hands a RFI, that they could take the powers off conduits with. They used a Blast Core, but they were less careful, and because of an experiment with the Blast Core (they were trying to split it off), it exploded. He was closest to it, and got affected. After the explosion, he became a Conduit.

He tried to remain calm and not showing his powers. He came through his life well. he got a wife, and got a son, Connor.  But when he found out that the child had the same powers as him (due to genetic share or what it's called) he tried to kill it because he was afraid of its future. But when he saw his child, he couldn't kill him, so the father dissappeared. The mother was with Connor, and after the dad left, she would never tell her son about his father. She would try to raise him as a normal child, no matter what. She didn't want him to become a bio-weapon for the army.

After 12 years, Connor discovered, that he actually had powers. He discovered it, when he fell off their own roof. He could see, that he healed and that it didn't hurt that much. After that, he became more courageous. He tried to jump off roofs and make parkour, and he was a nature talent at it.

But at a galla with his classmates (he had classmates, his best friend was Nicky and Chris), some scientists came and ordered him to become a research project. They knew that he had powers from his dad. They didn't tell him, and they didn't tell him that he had other powers either nor that he should become a bio weapon. But he still said no, and the agents and scientists didn't like his answer. So they send agents to kidnap him when he was heading home, and it was then that he found out his powers and he paralyzed the agents. He had a choice, to kill them or leave them to the scientists and the military government. He let them be and went home.

After that, he realized, that he could use his powers to become a superhero. He told it to Nicky and Chris, who only believed in him, after he proved it. There was a lot of crime in his city, and he wanted it to be gone.

Personally: Connor is kinda naive, sometimes. Most of the time he uses by playing parkour and video games with his friends. He is gentle, when he can be, but if he is in trouble, he always get away. Due to his mother , he is gentle to his mother and usually wants to make her happy by surprising her and stuff. He is an, yeah angel to his mother. when he is with friends, they make eachother laugh. When they play, run parkour and other stuff, they laugh. Like joking to eachother and they love it. lol!

Power use: He discovered his firstr power of lightning: To shoot spark shots. He can shoot them at his enemies and paralyze them for a little amount of time (most 3 seconds). He can also use his power to soar in the air, but he is still a beginner. He hasn't learned to run twice as fast as a normal human still, but...yeah

Appearence Form: He is very courageous and always tries to exceed his limit or other's limit.

Eye Color: Dark Brown (Can sometimes turn yellow when he uses his powers.)

Hair Color: Black

Skin Color: Dark Moulat (Mother is african, dad is american)

Clothing Style: Blue West, white blouse, blue, hat (kinda knitted hat from his mother), blue pants with pants pockets and black running shoes.

End Affliction: His karma is Neutral.


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PostSubject: Re: Connor Miles (inFamous Create Your Own Character)   Fri Dec 05, 2014 6:40 am

legolosarrow wrote:
Seems good, but his powers are over the top and there's not enough detail about them.

He's strong enough that he was able to kill his father, who you said had the exact same powers as him, when he was only a baby? You're telling me he's powerful enough he he can easily kill someone who has infinitely more experience than he does with his own powers?

Also, shooting lightning at a Cole McGrath level? No. It's a general understanding here the infamous protagonists are over powered, and if a character is equal to or greater than them it's considered a no-no. And just how fast can he run? If it's more than a twice as fast as an average person, then it's a no in conjunction with his already awesomely powerful lightning.

tldr; Just tone down the powers and try to make it more clear about their extent.
Ok, i have made my character more "limited". Is it good enough? He didn't kill his father at the start, but this time his father left himself.
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PostSubject: Re: Connor Miles (inFamous Create Your Own Character)   Fri Dec 05, 2014 8:08 pm

Mkay. Everything seems to be in order, however, all characters here start out with neutral karma. I'll accept him, but be sure to write in you signature that he has neutral karma and it'll be all good.


Actually, small problem. You should've posted this in the unaccepted character sheets section, but you posted it here and it seems I don't have the power to move things from this section... He's accepted but the sheet will stay here...

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